Ellie devised a range of different methods for audience feedback, mostly aimed at our primary target audience, but also our secondary and tertiary audiences and people that aren't in any of the aforementioned social classes. Below are audience profiles for the three types of audience.
Below is a prezi designed to be the desk of a member of our primary audience. The playlist on their screen shows the sort of music that they would listen to: Charli XCX, Tonight Alive, CHVRCHES and Paramore. The post-it not shows that they are in a band and play guitar, as does the guitar plectrum. The sketchbook and pencils scattered around (plus the doodle) show that the audience member is arty. These people are the kind of group that we are specifically aiming for.
Firstly, at the beginning of December, we got feedback from all other classes on the first draft of our music video. As it wasn't finished and needed a lot of tweaking, there were lots of things that people thought we could improve on. The most feedback we got was questioning the box that Zahra (our drummer) was playing. This was due to the school rules caused restrictions during filming. We explained afterwards that this was the only way we could think of to make up for the lack of real drums! A lot of feedback was also given on the colour of the video. The whole first draft was in black and white. A few people liked the black and white whereas some people wanted some colour.
We took all of the feedback into consideration when editing it to make our final piece. We altered the colour so that all of the verses were in black and white and choruses in colour. We also inserted more individual shots of Zahra playing real drums to try and detract from the box in other shots. This seemed to work - less feedback was given about the colour and people rarely commented on the box.
These are screenshots of the online survey (all audiences) Ellie created for people to take part in. It asks questions such as "What is your age?" as well as opinions on the music video. This is to see what our audience as a whole enjoyed or disliked about the video and whether they thought Alleyways as a band were relatable and current. This survey was not targeted at a specific audience such as our primary, secondary or tertiary audience but instead to anyone that watched the video to get general opinions.



Ellie's mum very kindly posted the links to our music video and feedback survey on her facebook with a request that all of her friends answer the questions and Ellie's sister asked some of her friends to do the same. This is where the majority of our feedback came from which is good because it gave us a wider understanding and, more importantly, audience - different gnders and ages of people with different interests rather than just asking other classes in our year and friends to answer the survey which could have been biased.
We got over 25 responses and the feedback we got was mostly positive with the positives and negatives/constructive criticisms shown in padlets below.
A lot of the positive feedback stated that we were fun and unique which is the image we were going for - different from everyone else and like we really wanted to make music.
Everyone who completed the survey answered "Yes" to the question: "Do Alleyways appear to be a relevant/current/relatable band?" Most gave answers as to why. We learnt that people think we are realistic and current as our image is fun, unique and quirky. We have good chemistry as a band and gel well. We have an 'indie' aesthetic that is quite popular nowadays, as well as other points, seen below.
We have conducted a screening session for people to watch our music video and give feedback via a questionnaire which rates things from 1-5 such as costumes, performances, narrative etc. The general response was very positive with a lot of 4 and 5 star ratings.
Above are some pictures of comes of the responses we got. From this we can deduce that our costumes were overall well received with lots of 4 stars and one response of 3 stars. Our locations got a similar response and got 5/5 all round for how well the video fit with the song. We had a very average/below average response to how easy the video was to follow, meaning that we could possibly have made it a bit clearer and easier to understand. overall, the video was very well received and we got lots of 5s and a 4.5.
Above is a video of some audience feedback that Ellie filmed with some members of our audience asking general questions above positives and negatives of the video. Again, the video seemed very well-received. We were told that everyone enjoyed the video and one person wouldn't even change anything if they got the chance to direct the video themselves!
Overall, feedback has been very positive for our music video. Things we could have improved on include changing the colour of some shots and replacing the box that Zahra (our drummer) played on with actual drums which was impossible due to circumstance.